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I am a child
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I make them mad
By saying my opinon
That makes me sad
I'm like a glitch in their dominion
People make fun of me
Because I seem small
Is that all they can see?
If I don't be brave I will fall
I am a child
On the inside
I run wild
But have no one to confide
Make fun of me all you want
I am who I am
What do you have to flaunt?
I am real, but you who make fun of me are the sham.
By saying my opinon
That makes me sad
I'm like a glitch in their dominion
People make fun of me
Because I seem small
Is that all they can see?
If I don't be brave I will fall
I am a child
On the inside
I run wild
But have no one to confide
Make fun of me all you want
I am who I am
What do you have to flaunt?
I am real, but you who make fun of me are the sham.
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its short and hope you like it
its short and hope you like it © 2011 - 2024 jasmineangel
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Very nice. As others have said, it is short and to the point which is part of what makes it work.
A small critique I would offer is to break up that last line into 3 lines just to emphasize the three statements in it. Personally I would write it out like this:
I am real
but you who make fun of me
are the sham.
That's just my two cents, anyway.
Over all, good poem.
A small critique I would offer is to break up that last line into 3 lines just to emphasize the three statements in it. Personally I would write it out like this:
I am real
but you who make fun of me
are the sham.
That's just my two cents, anyway.
Over all, good poem.